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Post  Jackal lover68 on Fri Dec 18, 2009 5:09 pm

Chapter 30: This could be a problem...

Lintery made her way to room 5000 after an hour. "FINNALY!" Just as Lintery looked up she noticed something she had a halo that made her frown. As she walked in she could see several maren arm wrestling some wer fighting. "HEY LOOK FRESH MEAT!" A voice boomed from one side. "SHE DOESNT LOOK SO TOUGH WHY IS SHE HERE!" Lintery said nothing and walked over to a bed. "Look you people im here for well i dont know just sometimes i get alot of power..." "SHOW US!!!" Lintery sighs.

Spire woke up to hear a motorcycle sound coming near them. "Danfed must be on his way..." Spire thought. Danfed pulled up and stopped his motorcyle. "Well well if you two wanted to be alone you just need to ask." Danfed joked mocking how Tine was still asleep cuddled up to Spire. "Tine wake up." Spire said tapping Tine's head Tine yawned and looked into Spire's eyes and blushed she got up. So did Spire. "Well you two try and keep up my brother is only 20 miles behind us. And he teamed up with Micro and her partner." "Great..." Tine said looking down. "This could be a problem..." Spire said.
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Re: Near far blast in nightmare (Blood Warning)

Post  Jackal lover68 on Sat Dec 19, 2009 7:09 am

Chapter 31: We take a rough path

Danfed hit the gas pedal after a little while and took off screaming in delight of how the wind felt on his face. "WOOOO HOOOO THIS IS SO FUN!" Spire looked up then at Tine. "You ready?" Tine turned around and smiled. "Yeah lets try to keep up with Danfed after all he is faster then us." Spire agreed and looked at the road. He began to run Danfed's way. Tine ran off with them. As they came to the first stop they noticed they had got further ahead. "Hello little brother." Danfed's brother said with a smile. "Big brother..." Danfed said with a frown. "DONT FORGET ME!" Micro appears still in her cloak and her partner also appears. "Lets kill them..." Micro said with a evil smile. Tine took battle stance as did Spire, Danfed he just hit the gas quickly on his motorcycle. "Yes lets my little brother means nothing to me now!" Danfeddd looked down he was hurt by that. "Danfed dont listen to him!" Spire yelled. As the battle began here was the match up Tine vs Micro Danfed vs his brother (Dark star 003 vs Dark star 002 basicly but in maren form) And Spire vs Mono. Danfed kicked his brother away as Spire kicked Mono into Danfed's brother and Micro sent several knifes at Tine of which all impaled her. "No "cough" This cant be grr!"

Lintery was thrown backwerds. "HAHA YOUR NOT SO TOUGH!" A voice yelled. Lintery got up her eyes now glowing. "RIGHT NOW WHO WANTS SOME!" Lintery jumped back into the arena.

After minutes of fighting Spire was on his knee's in pain. Danfed was being held by jis brother in the air. And Tine was on the ground bleeding slightly crying in pain. "Pathitic little brother your still not strong enough to beat me." Danfed looked away ashamed. "HAHA now prepare for a fate worse then death. You remember the prophicy. The dark stars together sha'll become the strongest being in the world i've allready absorbed 10 dark stars now you." As Danfed was hit away from his brother he skidded off the ground and opend one eye but soon fainted. "AHHYAH!!!!!" Danfed's brother screamed as he punced at his younger brother. Micro grabbed him and sent him back. "No we must take leave let them suffer." Danfeds brother, Micro, and Mono disapeared. Spire barley any energy ran over to Tine who's skin was turning pale. "H-h-he-help me..." Spire said nothing his expression was worried he had allready lost his sister he wasnt about to let anyone a.k.a Tine die. Danfed got up. "They left dang..." He said disapointed. "Danfed! Look at Tine she's going to die look at all these wounds." Danfed said nothing. "Hmpf not my problem i need to find my brother right away." Spire looked at him angrily. "HELP HER!!" Danfed grinded his teeth. "FINE!" Danfed walked over his hands glowed a bright purple (this is Danfed's healing abbility he cant use it on himself but he can use it on other people.
light purple= slow heal
blue= modern heal
green= super heal
Orange= MEGA ULTRA HEAL!!!)
"Ok she will be better in a day you to get some rest i need to do something..."
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Post  Jackal lover68 on Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:00 pm

Chapter 32: prophesies

Spire had brought Tine into the rest house of their first stop she had fainted. During this time he never left her side then Danfed came into the house with a grumble. "Its true....!" He mummbled in anger he walked and sat down att a table. "Hey Danfed! WHY DID YOU NOT AGREE TO HELP TINE BACK THERE!" The kid said nothing he sighed. "You wouldnt understand what im going through right now..." Spire looked confused. "Let me tell you ok my species the Dark star get a prophecy when they are created there was a legend that if the prophecy fit with another prophecy it would bring the downfall of nightmare and life as we know it and guess what! MY PROPHECY AND MY BROTHERS PROPHECY FIT!!!" He collapsed at the table in anger. "What do you mean whats your prophecy?" He asked. "I shall find a nightmaren group of three... And my brother shall find me... The darkness of death swirls around... And one of the brothers sha'll find the true power of the dark..." "Doesnt really rhyme..." Spire said. "Well its my prophecy and my brothers is only known to him and i cant i just wont!" The kid started to cry. "I guess i should tell you the full story..." Danfed said looking up.

(Yup this is going into some of Danfed's past next chapter will be four parts Danfed's happiness his training the battle and his brother turning)
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Post  Jackal lover68 on Sat Dec 19, 2009 7:26 pm

Chapter 33 part 1 of 4: The past of dark star 003/Danfed

"Ok before i tell you pull up a chair and ill tell you and you must promise not to tell anyone!" Spire nodded in agreement and sat down in a chair next to Tine who was secretly awake now but she wouldnt tell. "Ok about a year ago i was playing tag with my big brother..."

A kid ran through a burnt down forest trying his best to find his brother. "Aw man BIG BROTHER I CANT FIND YOU!!" The kids brother appeared behind him. "Hello little brother." "WAHH! AW BIG BROTHER YOU CHEAT!" The maren rolled his eyes. "Ok we need to head home the council will be expecting me for my nightly review..." The kid looked up. "BUT BIG BROTHER YOU MADE A PROMISE WE WOULD PLAY IN THE FOREST FOR AN HOUR ITS ONLY BEEN 30 MINUTES!" "You'll just have to play with the other two maren. Us species maren are um on a camping trip and well they havent been around in a while..." The kid looked up. "Yeah i wish they would get back soon." the older brother nodded. "Ok ill give you a piggy back ride sence you cant fly just yet." The kid cheered and hopped on his brothers back. "Ok lets go!." They get back to the main area the older brother sends the kid on his way. "Ok time to do this..." He turned around and headed into the castle. "COUNCIL IM HERE!!!" A voice said. "Ah welcome back Dark star 002." "Another voice said. "Where have you been!" "I have been with my younger brother." Another voice ccame out it was denomic however. "Yes Dark star 003 he will begin his training soon..." This maren said nothing. "You mean..... im going to train him." "Yes." Another voice said.

The kid ran up to his garage house where his friends were waiting. "Hey kid." That was the name they had givin Danfed sence he had no set name. "HI HEY guys whats that?" The other kid said it was a rock show. "Its happening tomarrow night you want to come?" The girl said. "Yeah sure if my brother lets me..." "So what do you guys want to do." The boy asked. "I know why dont we talk about our personal life's i've got this special bored that tells you your soul mate's name!" Sure the boy agreed The kid however didnt. "I dont want to do that i dont have a name after all..." "Oh no you prick your finger and well put some of your blood on the pad and it will tell you." The kid turned he knew that he would stay alone his life but he wouldnt say that. "Um no thanks ill just watch..." "Suit yourself..." Just then a message arived from the council. "Who's that from?" The kid smiled did this mean he would finnaly be able to be trained mabye even better by his brother. "Its from the council..."
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Post  Jackal lover68 on Sun Dec 20, 2009 10:01 am

Chapter 33 part 2 of 4: The past of dark star 003/Danfed

Spire then asked. "So you got a paper saying that you were to be trained correct." Danfed nodded.

The kid ran through he burnt woods again and came to the castle. "I've allways wondered what was on the other side of this door." The kid put his hand on the door the doors opened. "Sweet!" The kid ran through to the council's room where his brother was. "Ahh Dark star 003 nice to see you." The kid got confused. "What? I have no name." Another voice said. "You probably think your nightmaren to right? WRONG!" Another voice said. "Yes now we show you your true form!" They all waved their hand over him. The nightmaren kid was no more it was now a black/purple star... "What the what am i!" The councilleader smiled. "You are a dark star now let me give you your prophecy. You shall find a nightmaren group of three and your brother shall find you the darkness of death swirls around and one of the brothers shall find the true power of the dark." Dark star 003 changed back to maren form with a frown. "Now go train him Dark star 002!" He nodded and grabbed his younger brothers arm.

"Ok let me teach you how to fly first now flying these days is diffrent then it was in the past first feel your energy rush through you." Dark star 002 bent down to his littel brother and made a small sun coming in his hands. "This is energy you must push it up and force it through you." He did as he was told this was the only begining of his training.
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Post  Jackal lover68 on Sun Dec 20, 2009 3:25 pm

Chapter 33 part 3 of 4: The past of dark star 003/Danfed

"Um so you trained a night and a half of a day right?" Spire asked. "Yes i did then came the day of that rock show."

"Hey brother?" Dark star 002 turned around to see his little brother floating in the air. "Yeah?" The kid smiled. "Um could i go to..." Just as that happend a messanger appeared. "Sir Dark star 002 we got news of a appearence of the devil will you choose to accept the mission?" Dark star 002 nodded. "Ok but my little brother gets to come to." He smiled at his younger brother. "Are you sure he only just began his training?" He smiled again. "Yes but he has my natural talent." Smiles for the third time. "Lets head out little brother." The kid nodded.

"After that we went to the rock show my friends were allready there."

The kid and his brother arrived and looked at the rock show area the only one's sitting in the seats were Dark star 003's friends. A nightmaren appread he looked evil almost red eyes grey his face pale not white pale either. "Hello you three ready to rock! Wait there are two of you where is your friend?" They looked up. "Huh how did you?" The nightmaren screamed in anger it transformed into THE DEVIL! "GAH YOU USELESS MAREN!" It shot them with a strike of darkness turning them into monsters then killing them. "NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!" The kid screamed his brother tried to stop him but of course the kid jumped down infront of the devil sniffling. "Y-y-you killed my "sniffles" Best friends!" A dark glow surrounded the kid. "Oh crap this is bad..." The brother thought. Then he noticed something his littles brothers eye were a three point dark star! "Y-you killed my friends!" The devil just laughed. "Your jokeing right the allmighty council decided to send a CHILD TO KILL ME HAHAHA!" The devil made a huge black trident appear in its hands it had streaks of blue on the tips. "Yes come kid!"

"Then its a blank i fainted my brother says he saved me but my story aint over yet a day later..."
TO BE CONTINUE!
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Post  Jackal lover68 on Sun Dec 20, 2009 6:15 pm

Chapter 33 part 4 of 4: The past of dark star 003/Danfed

The kid sat down at a rock picking burnt grass and through it down. Then he noticed his big brother. "Oh hi big brother what are you doing all the way out here?" The kid said looking into his brothers eyes. "Im here to tell you something..." He said with a tense smile his eyes were tense as well. "What is it?" Dark star 002 sat besides his brother with anger. "You know how we use this maren form?" The kid nodded. "Well i quit!" The kid turned to his brother who now had grabbed him and slammed him against a tree. "NOW MY DUMB LITTLE BROTHER ALOW ME TO EXPLAIN! I have put up with these council members for far to long now!" He gave a devilish smile an dropped him. "I join the winning team!" With that he left with an evil laugh. However he left behind a yellow belt.

"And thats my story as you can see also i leave you two now..." Spire asked Danfed why he was leaving. "Because i need to do something..." He disapeared in a shadow.

"Well i guess thats over..." Spire said. "Yeah...." Tine's weak voice said. "What the how long have you been awake?" Tine said nothing for a second. "Sence the begining of the story..." Spire smiles. "Well ok just dont tell anyone what can i get you Tine..." Tine smiled weakly her eyes half open. "Oh nothing i dont need anything..." Tine blinked once at Spire then turned around. "Ill call you if i need anything..." Spire smiled and pulled up a cot and ploped down on it and gave one final look at Tine before he closed his eyes. Tine said nothing still being awake in the dark. She thought. "WOW what a day i got to spend all that time with Spire tomarrow will be another good day because we will bring Lintery back im sure of it..."
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Post  Jackal lover68 on Mon Dec 21, 2009 3:18 pm

Chapter 34: The darker side of Danfed

Danfed ran towards the woods far away from the cabin he fell to his knee's feeling anger and sadness but why? He kept struggling in pain he saw a fugure transulcent almost appear above him. "My turn to shine..." The voice said with that Danfed screamed in pain. "Who are you!" The voice chuckled. "Everything that is or will be bad about you..." Then Danfed's clothes turned silver his horns were now dark yellow and bronze. "Im Hyper you of course and this is my time to KILL!"

It was the morning now Tine looked completly better. "I can see your better." Spire said. "Yep that healing abbility of Danfed's works really well." Spire nodded. "Well we should head out. Wait i hear something screams perhaps..." Spire walked off Tine followed. They eventualy got to a town. People were dieing but no one saw who was killing them like it was moveing like a shadow. "Hello you two!" Danfed's voice said then they saw him the one called Hyper Danfed.
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Post  Jackal lover68 on Mon Dec 21, 2009 7:09 pm

Chapter 35: Hyper is horrible!

Spire looked at this nightmaren. "You sound like Danfed but who are you?" Hyper Danfed smiled. "Im me not anything else yup but if you must know im Danfed just put Hyper infront of it im everything bad about Danfed!" He then launched at Spire and Tine shooting Fire at them he jumped back and grabbed Tine and held the demon sword to Tine's head. "Heheha I do this to every couple i meat!" Hyper Danfed said with a laugh. "Dang........ Tine." Spire said looking down. "What do you want?..." Hyper Danfed smiled. "Murder death I love them both." Hyper Danfed said with a sneer. "Only the blood of the inocent will cease my hunger." Spire said nothing he had an idea. "OH um well kill me not her." He winked at Tine. "Oh so the boyfriend wants to go first normally the boyfriend would have cut and run i love it when they do that oh well ok." Hyper Danfed slashed Spire instead of blood stuffing came out. "HA!" Spire kicked Hyper Danfed and sewed himself back up. "TINE RUN NOW!" Tine ran behind Spire. Then they noticed something Danfed was back to normal fainted. "He's normal but we should get out of here." Tine was to scared to move. "Tine!" Tine looked at him. "I-i-i cant." She looked down. "OH YES YOU ARE!" Spire grabbed Tine and tried to pull her. "This is my hometown..." She said looking at the burning remains. "Huh?" Spire asked. "I-i lost everything." She fell to her knee's her friends and everyone killed in this masacre and the worst part she couldnt blame Danfed it wasnt his fault that a pshyco had possesed him. Spire got down to the ground next to her and looked at her she was in a trance. "TINE SNAP OUT OF IT." He kissed her lips and put his hand over her cheek. This defintly broke her out of the trance. She kept hold of Spire and his kiss hopeing everything bad would just go away. After that she looked into his eyes. "Thanks Spire..." She got up her hand still on Spire's. Spire got up as well. "Lets keep moveing its only a little while longer till we can speak to Lintery." Tine nodded and ran with Spire.
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Post  Jackal lover68 on Mon Dec 21, 2009 7:27 pm

Chapter 36: Spirits

Eventually Spire and Tine got to an opening to the spirit world. "Ok oh god of death and godess of dark except our offering!" Spire took out a black sword nd cut part of his hand and grabbed some stuffing then sewed himself up again. "Tine the only way to see Lintery is well." He gave her the sword. "Um you sure about that?" Spire nodded she cut herself and almost yelped and gave Spire the sword They dropped their blood or type of blood in at the same time. As that happend Lintery appeared in spirit form. "Tine, Spire good to see you guys!" Tine nodded in agreement. "Yup Lintery, Spire has a plan to bring you back to make it so your game hadn't ended!" Lintery looked at Spire. "And this is?" Spire looked at Lintery and smiled. "For you to use your power and Wizeman to use his to revive you." Lintery frowned. "You realize how many chapters it would take to get back to Wizeman's lair right?"(AHH THEY BROKE THE FOURTH WALL AGAIN!!!) "36 yeah it plus parts however Jackal lover is to lazy to right that much so he came up with a way of useing the spirit world to get there." Lintery smiled. "Ok well let me open the portal." Lintery snapped her fingers and a portal to the spirit world opend up. "Come on in." Tine and Spire ran through.
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Post  Jackal lover68 on Tue Dec 22, 2009 5:20 pm

Chapter 37: Spire and Tine vs Reala

Tine exited another portal into Wizemans lair and Spire exited soon after. "Ahaha!" Tine said. "Wizeman..." Spire said looking at the cold dead stare that he was giving him. "Cront what a pleasent suprize..." Wizeman said sarcasticly. "Wizeman im prepared to make a deal i will do anything but you must revive Lintery!" Spire said proudly Wizeman said nothing then Reala appeared. "YOU two again master Wizeman does not have time for you to..." "Wait!!!" Wizeman yelled then he said. "If you two beat Reala i will revive Lintery. Tine waisted no time and hit Reala on the head and kicked him to Spire. Of course Reala shot Spire with a dark energy blast. This sent him back into a wall he let out a yelp of pain. Tine ran but was punched away Reala took flight into the sky and he sent another beam of Dark energy but this time at Tine. She counterd by useing a wind attack sending it at Wizeman she jumped up and did a back flip. "YAHHH!!!!!" Tine screamed as she was in mid back flip the wind carried her and she hit Reala in the jaw it barley fased him. Spire ran right before Tine was about to be punched. "NO YOU DONT!" He yelled at him and kicked Reala away. "MY SWORD!" Spire yelled seeing his black sword on a pedestal. "Huh wait i cant i need to..." He ran and grabbed the sword it felt heavier now because of how he was weaker. "MY SWORD YES NOW YOU!" Spire charged at Reala and slashed at him this cut part of Reala's hand and vest. Tine kicked him. Spire jumped next to Tine. "You ready!" Tine nodded. "TEAM OVERDRIVE!" They both yelled Spire disapeared at the speed of light landing several blows on Reala he then slashed Reala's head a loud clank could be heard he kicked Reala to Tine who sent a wind blast at him sending him straight back at Spire who delivered the final blow. Reala fell to his knee's then he colapsed completly. They turned their attention to Wizeman. "Well a deal's a deal Wizeman!" Another person arrived in that room at the time it was a hologram though. "ALL NIGHTMAREN LISTEN OUR WAR SHIPS HAVE GONE OUT OF CONTROL ALSO THE PEOPLE WHO HAVE DONE THIS NOW HAVE FIVE FORBIDDEN IDEYA!!!" Tine looked and frowned. "Oh no Jackal stole the forbidden ideya then..." Lintery appeared. "I had to give up my vision power but YAY ITS GOOD TO BE BACK!" Wizeman then said. "You need this if you want to beat Jackal!" Wizeman tossed the last forbidden ideya to Lintery who caught it. "Thank you Wizeman... NOW COME ON WE DONT HAVE TIME!" Just as Lintery said that the ships began fireing at every world in nightmare.

(Yup the final chapters are coming 38, 39, and 40 however part 40 will be ten parts yup ten because thats where all the battle's will be. We have had some good times but i have a feeling Lintery aint holding back this time with Jackal so catch us next time in NEAR FAR BLAST!!!)
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Post  Jackal lover68 on Wed Dec 23, 2009 11:13 am

Chapter 38: The war ships of Jackal

Lintery jumped from rock to rock she seemed most determined to stop Jackle. "Im coming Jackle!" Tine appeared at Lintery's side and so did Spire. "What Lintery revenge wont solve anything!" Lintery pretended not to hear. "Please Lintery if you come to Jackle forgive him or..." Lintery stopped and pointed up. "There those they are the ships..." Spire said nothing but Tine. "LINTERY! What do you think you are doing." Lintery frowned. "We need to see this through Tine if Jackle gets his hands on this last forbidden ideya were seriously done for! OK so the main ship is all the way up front and were in the back section so..." Lintery took off. "Spire what do you think?" Spire looked down. "I dont know but... I have a bad feeling about the rest of this journey..." Tine nodded. "Me to so lets go."

Lintery stopped and looked Micro and her partner were coming at them. "Aw great them again..." Spire said Lintery chuckled. "I will defeat them." Spire looked at her as if saying she was saying "Oh im just going to put salt on myself and jump into a Girania tank." Spire and Tine said. "NO WE WILL NOT!" Lintery smiled. "Ok thanks you guys." Lintery powered up her eyes now glowing she charged at them Spire and Tine also charged at them. As the battle broke out another thing was going on back at the main ships.

"So the ships are progressing smoothly?" A voice said from a moniter. Jackle smiled. "Yep soon we will have all the forbidden ideya now im going to fire the cannon!" The voice said. "Without all six forbidden ideya thats not going to be enough power to dispose of the energy that keeps this planet alive." Jackle laughed evily. "Yes i know but first we must find the area to create an army of supers we have robots but we dont have supers adding machinery and super energy together well hehehe."

Danfed woke up and scratched his head. "Ow where am i? Oh yeah that thing took control of me..." He got up and looked. "Dark clouds? Oh no this is bad..." Danfed ran off towards the ships as he ran he appeared in a sitting motion a motorcycle appeared under him he was riding it to the ships.

Spire slashed with his sword this made her cloak fall off down to the ground. "No...!" Micro said her hands covering her face her horns were so small you couldnt see them she had red hair with streaks of grey and wore a black shirt and blue jeans. Her partner rushed over to her. "H-Hey you ok." She lifted her hands away from her face and kicked him away so hard he went through a ship. "DANG IT I SAID DONT COME NEAR ME ESPICALY WITH MY CLOAK OFF COME ON WERE LEAVING!" She disapeared so did her partner. Lintery smiled. "Two chapters left and ten parts to the last chapter see you all later!" (-_- they broke the fourth wall for the 50th time i give up on telling them not to anyway see you in chapter 39!)
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Post  Jackal lover68 on Thu Dec 24, 2009 4:46 pm

Chapter 39: Lintery's anger increases

Lintery stopped looking at the main ship her face was the face of anger. "Idiot Jackle..." She looked back at Spire and Tine. "Thank you guys for helping me but.... this is where i must fight him alone!" Spire and Tine were about to say no when Lintery yelled. "NO THIS IS MY BATTLE YOU NEED TO PROTECT ME BY TAKEING OUT THE OTHER ENEMYS!" They both shocked by what Lintery had yelled she really wanted to do this fight alone. "Lintery why?" Lintery looked down she knew that they knew why. "You know why i want revenge hwat happend 3 years ago has haunted me... So i must go in alone..." Lintery gave one smile which was forced and took off for hte main ship. "Spire we need to help her some how..." Spire aggread. "Yes but how? Lintery really wants to do this alone so?" Tine smiled and flew over to him. "Cant you feel it that horid rain is coming." Spire said nothing.

Danfed just appeared after doing flips on his motorcycle. "GUYS WE NEED TO GET OUT OF HERE NOW!" Spire looked at him. "Why?" Danfed panted. "BECAUSE THEIR GOING TO SAP THE ENERGY OUT OF EVERYONE HERE!" Just as he said that he was zapped. 'AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!" He fell down. "Poor pathitic brother now we fight and you couple must go fight Micro and neoryu." (Pronounced Neo ri) Tine and Spire headed off. "Now my little brother we will have the showdown that was ment to be!"

(Wow ok thats part 39 of the story stay tuned for the final ten parts of the story!)
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Post  Jackal lover68 on Sat Dec 26, 2009 7:55 am

Chapter 40 part 1 of 10: Spire fights ra-hts

Spire continued to run further up until he got to neoryu. "You still not hurt from being kicked through a ship. And Tine get to Micro now!" Tine ran off. "Ok Neoryu lets have at it!" Neo ryu flew up into the air at this point and sent rodents at the ground. "Meet the Rahts the main source of my power." As the rahts jumped at Spire he jumped and got out his sword and jumped at the rahts he killed one or two but there were still many more. "COME ON YOU COWERD FACE ME!" Continues to kill the vermin but is still having a hard time.

Lintery stopped and looked up there it was the main ship. "So thats the main ship huh well its TIME!" Lintery power's up and charges at the ship once she got through she looked around and she saw she was in the control room. "Cool..." Lintery jumped up to a button. "Ra-hts activator and deactivator i should mabye deactivate them?" She hits the button instintly killing all the Ra-hts.

Spire smiled at Neoryu. "You cant hide behind that curtain anymore!" Neoryu mouthed the words. "I guess not..." He charged at Spire and hit him in his face sending his sword skidding across the room.

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Post  Jackal lover68 on Sat Dec 26, 2009 5:50 pm

Chapter 40 part 2 of 10: Spire's swords creation

Neoryu store at Spire with a blank stare he made the sword appear in his hand. "This is your sword am i correct?" Spire had a scared look on his face and said. "Y-yes..." Neoryu grinned. "I thought so... You see i made this sword choose to believe me or not but i've been reincarnated several times and im a famous forger I even made the.........FORBIDDEN IDEYA!" Spire's eyes widend. "What?!!!" Neoryu laughed evily. "You see i created this sword as half of a key if you will there are two swords that when combined well hehe it can open the lock to imortality supers. Yes however these were never created there was only one imortality who will hehe he was put in a block of ice and sealed away forever on another planet." Spire got up and Neoryu tossed the sword into his hands. "Huh?" Neoryu smiled. "I have no need to steal it back but i might as well tell you about something in the future your friend Lintery will be forced to make a tough decsion to kill somebody and you might be that person!" Neoryu disapeared.

Lintery continued her run and stopped seeing two guards she listend to what they were saying. "So you heard about that ghost maren down in the bottom of this ship?" The second guard said. "Yep legend says it she was once a maren happy with her life but then the original owner of this ship did horrible things to her hurting her stealing her life force and making her cry every single day. Lintery mummbled. "How can a person be so cruel...?" The guards laughed. "ITS PROBABLY FAKE ANYWAY HAHA!" Lintery ran out and hit both of them with an ideya. Just as she moved she fell in shoot she went through the shoot screaming. "AHHHHHHH!" She landed and looked up the room was cold seriously cold. "W-w-w-w-who's there!" A chilling voice asked.
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Post  Jackal lover68 on Sat Dec 26, 2009 9:05 pm

Chapter 40 part 3 of 10: Micro explains everything

Tine ran faster she could no longer hear Spire fighting the Ra-hts. When she got to a new room she looked up there Micro was still uncloaked. "You took your time to get here i almost gave up on waiting for you..." Tine took battle stance. "You should'nt do that..." Tine yelled. "WHY NOT!" Micro's looked at Tine this stare was the kind of omg you still havent figured it out. "Tine look into my eyes tell me you dont know me..." Tine looked into her eyes and gasped. "I know who you are!" Micro grined. "Long time no see sister." (Yup Tine's sister who was suposeifly "murdered" She really survived) "Sister alow me to explain i survived Dark star 010 and well hehe i got a makeover." Tine looked down. "But we were created as rebel nightmaren you even said you wanted to find someone..." Micro rolled her eyes. "No i turned my back on that now i have access to all the files in nightmare this plan of Jackle's is to collect the forbidden ideya and Spire's sword and Danfed's sword... The peices have gathered and soon a new world..."

Danfed blinked twice and got up. He was strapped to a table. "I wish to fight you at full power my little brother so this will only hurt for 2 seconds." Danfed's brother took out a needle and a vile he injected the stuff into Danfed's arm. "YAHHHH!!" The middle part of the dark star eyes were filled.

Lintery jumped back at seeing a ghost. "Hi my name is Youtlin." (pronounced You to Lin) Lintery moved her head back and fourth. "Hi im Lintery you must be the maren who was abused, tortured and killed?" Youtlin expression seemed sad. "Yeah i am see what happend was i once lived in a village but then the original leader of this ship came to our village and he came every weak to find one imortal super and that was me..." Lintery's eyes widend. "WHAT? NO WAY!!" Youtlin sighed. "Yes he found me and captured me and slowly killed me in several ways now im nothing but a ghost..."
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Post  Jackal lover68 on Sun Dec 27, 2009 7:19 am

Chapter 40 part 4 of 10: Tine and Micro vs the control brain

Tine looked behind Micro it was what she was sent to destroy the main part of the ships the one that kept them afloat. "Sister if you would help me destroy the machine behind you i would happy..." Micro looked at her sister and nodded. "Sure thing." Micro attacked the machine with great force so did Tine as they kept attacking it a wire from the brain appeared and grabbed Tine. It took several weapons and stabbed her so much she was pale. It dropped her and tried to attack Micro epic fail she cut it in half destroying the brain. "Tine you ok?" No answer. "Man i guess i should help her,m she is my sister...

(sorry this chapter is short im having horrible acid reflex at the moment)
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Post  Jackal lover68 on Mon Dec 28, 2009 5:42 pm

Chapter 40 part 5 of 10: Brother vs Brother

Danfed woke again to find himself on the top of the main ship. "What the?" His brothers voice boomed. "GET UP NOW AND FIGHT!" His brother sent a dark blast at the sky it got dark and began to hail and lightning. "What big brother..." Danfed took stance. "I dont care what your about to say I told you that we would be fighting!" Dark star 002 ran at his younger brother Danfed closed his eyes and reopend them they were the complete five point dark star. "Ok big brother you asked for it!" Takes out his entire deck and throws all of the cards around the area. "This is good my big brother doesnt know about this attack..." Danfed did a back flip as his brother sent a chain of darkness at him. Danfed then ran towards the chain and grabbed it sending it back ten fold. "AHH!" Dark star 002 looked at his younger brother. "No way its not possible!" Danfed wondered what he was talking about. "Crap this is bad i got to finnish this now!" Danfed then realized his brother was staring at the figure behind him. "Your... Dark star 000!" The maren smiled his star eyes were more purple and were over 100 points. "My young dark star..." Then he disapeared. "Wierd..." Dark star 002 ran at him yelling he hit his younger brother sending him across the ship. Danfed looked his eyes burning with rage. "Demon sword i need you..." A sword appeared right next to Danfed. "What thats a new weapon!" Dark star 002 said. "Hehe." Danfed got up and pulled up the sword.
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Post  Jackal lover68 on Mon Dec 28, 2009 8:37 pm

Chapter 40 part 6 of 10: Sacriface of a hero

Danfed skidded his sword off the ship's top running at his brother he kicked him then slashed his clothes. "BIG BROTHER ENOUGH!" He ran at his brothe but was kicked away. "No little brother not enough must kill you...!" Dark star 002 charged at his younger brother who just jumped away but was scratched. "Ow big brother..." He jumped in the air the wieght of the demon sword was just to much for a kid. The sword hit his brothers head. Sadly Danfed's brother turned intangible before he could actually go into his head and kill him. "Brother-" Danfed was kicked and punched then his brother unleashed his overdrive on him almost killing him. Danfed got hit then Danfed activated his overdrive. "Big brother..." Danfed's brother looked down he was standing in a circle of cards. "NOW!" The cards began circling around Danfed's brother and started cutting him Danfed hopped his brother would just bleed so much he would faint but no he escaped and grabbed Danfed. "Little brother." His hand became claws and began draining Danfed's power. "AHHH!!!!" Danfed's brother smiled. "Dont struggle it will only make the pain worse..." Just as Danfed gave up hope Micro appeared and sacraficed herself to save him. "Huh?" Tine appeared. "Thanks sister. Danfed i told her to save you and she did..." Spire arrived on the scene at that moment. Danfed's brother store. "No this is no!" Danfed's brother then yelled. "NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" He sent a dark beam at them and captured them all but his brother. "Get up brother get up now!" Danfed got up he was in tight situation

Lintery continued to chat with this ghost asking her more questions. "So i see is their any way out of here?" Just as she asked that Jackle appeared with a twisted smile then is melted into a devil like frown. "So Lintery you made it huh?" Lintery's eyes glowed. "Yes i did..." Jackle licked his lips with excitment. "Then i suppose this means the final battle..." Lintery nodded.
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Post  Jackal lover68 on Mon Dec 28, 2009 8:57 pm

Chapter 40 part 7 of 10: No hope for dark star 002 (play brother my brother by blessid union of souls for this chapter)

Danfed walked to his brother and store up at him. "Big brother I allways respected you but look at you now..." Danfed's brother just simply hit him making him flying backwerds he got up and continued to walk to his brother. "Please big brother enough! I cant take it anymore this fight between you and me, I wish it would end!" Spire mumbled. "You should have found me before Lintery." Danfed's brother just laughed. "Really huh you wish it would end huh then join me and our team!" Danfed stood his ground which got him back down and he got back up. "Foolish big brother dont you know im happy with working for the council and I, I will take over from where they left off when they die!" This comment made his brother pick him up. "YOUR A FOOL LITTLE BROTHER YOU JUMP RIGHT INTO THINGS ALLWAYS THIS IS WHY YOU WILL DIE ON THIS VERY SPOT!!!" Danfed's brother took out a gun. "HAHAHAH NOW MY LITTLE BROTHER DIE!" Danfed's brother pulled the trigger. There was a bullet hole on the wall but it didnt hit Danfed his brother then colapsed. "Huh?" Danfed looked up to see Dark star 000. "You?" Dark star 00 floated down to him. "Hello Dark star 003 or im sorry Danfed i gave you that sword now i give you something else." Dark star 000 opend up a case and looked at Danfed and sprinkled something one his eyes. "One day it will activate and you will have the 4 demon star eyes." He winked at Danfed and disapeared. "Bye brother..."

(next chapters are the fight between Lintery and Jackle so stay tuned)
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Post  Jackal lover68 on Thu Dec 31, 2009 8:31 am

Chapter 40 part 8 of 10: Lintery vs Jackle

Lintery and Jackle went to the main arena of the main ship. "Idiot Jackle!" Lintery ran at Jackle eyes fully a glow she ran into Jackle and slammed him into a wall. After that she picked him up and kicked him away. "Jackle this time you wont get away..." Jackle saved himself and then began throwing cards all around Lintery the cards were coming like water in a shower. Lintery powerd up A sun coming and burned all through the cards. "DIE JACKLE!" Jackle's cape made the Sun coming explode Lintery jumped into the air and began firing ideya from the launcher. "Jackle!" Lintery shouted sending a fith ideya at him he dodged that one. "Lintery wow she's really angry could she win?" Jackle sent the death card down at Lintery she just kicked it far into the air and it ended up hitting Jackle. Jackle looked down and fell. "Yes i win huh?" Jackle got up laughing. "Fool you think that my own cards can kill me?!"

(to be continued in part 9)
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Post  Jackal lover68 on Thu Dec 31, 2009 1:04 pm

Chapter 40 part 9 of 10: Lintery and Jackle foes

"Lintery why did you track all over the world?" Lintery breathed in and out. "To stop you of course i hate the fact that you are living. You gave me a scar you killed me and banished me!" Lintery hit Jackale in the face. "Gah Lintery you must understand my methods soon the world will be perfect i just must find the forbidden temple..." Lintery looked at him with anger. "Your a mad man!" Jackle smirked. "And i have five and you have the last." Lintery looked at him. "!!!" Jackle laughed. "Yes i know you have it now give it to me!" Jackle sent a card at Lintery who took the hit. "Never!" Jackle sighed. "Pitty..." Jackle flew into the air the forbidden ideya circled him he sent a beam of pure dark energy at Lintery it made contact. "AHH!!!!!!!!!!" Lintery colapsed. "Evacuate imeditly ship 5889 is going to crash into the oasis below us in aproxmitly 5 minutes." Cue it just saying Evacuate imeditly. Jackle grabbed Lintery's forbidden ideya and headed off. Lintery got up and headed out the escape doors.

(Story ends next chapter who will win the fight? Find out midnight tonight!)
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Post  Jackal lover68 on Thu Dec 31, 2009 10:00 pm

Chapter 40 part 10 of 10: End chapter (bring a snack seriously this chapter is L.O.N.G!!!...)

Lintery jumped through area's of the ship her anger focoused on finishing Jackle even dieing in the process would be ok as long as she took down Jackle. "Jackle im coming for you and when i get there you'd better hope i dont kill you!" Lintery took battle pose as she got to the escape room where Jackle was, the clock was now. 2 minutes and 36 seconds. "Jackle!" Lintery powered up her eyes glowing brightly. "Now Lintery we only have a couple minutes left we really should leave this for a different time!" Lintery tackled Jackle both tumbleing into the escape pod the escape pod launched Lintery still hitting Jackle and Jackle struggleing to get away.

They crashed into an angient building. "I dont believe it this is the angient building the forbidden building? Now with the power of the forbidden ideya i will become the god of this world!" Jackle ran up the stairs a look of evilness in his eyes. Lintery shouted. "NOOO!!!!!!!" The forbidden ideya glowed and Lintery charged up a sun coming she ran at Jackle but was smacked away but as she ran close to him a second time she said. "Near!" Jackle almost kicked her away but she jumped away on her own acount. "Far!" Lintery held out her hand instead of the sun shape it was pyramid shape. "BLAST!" Lintery fired the Near far blast beam at Jackle it hit him and sent him flying. "Ive had enough of you Jackle!" The forbidden ideya zapped Lintery and she transformed into Forbidden Lintery. "You Jackle will now pay!" Forbidden Lintery sent several Near far blast at Jackle all making contact with him hurting him extremly.

Danfed, Spire, and Tine ran out looking at the main ship crash they had made it to safty of the dence jungle. "Looks like we need to get over to where that escape pod landed." Spire suggested Tine to shaken from the explosion yelled. "NOOO!" Spire sat next to her and tried to comfort her. "I will go and find out." Danfed charged off into the jungle.

Lintery kicked Jackle sending several more Near far blasts at him. "Lintery how did you get so erp strong!" Forbidden Lintery smiled. "Not telling!" Forbidden Lintery punched Jackle and then grabbed him spun him and sent him flying into a wall. Forbiden Lintery looked at the ruble with anger. "I won its over YES I KILLED JACKLE I KILLED JACKLE!" But before Lintery could finnish celebrating She looked at the ruble. "What the?" The forbidden ideya glowed dark and evil like of there previous collors and Jackle reapeared his eyes compltly red his skin tone now purple his horns black he grew demon wings. "Kill kill kill!" It chanted. "Your, your not Jackle!" Forbidden Lintery looked at the corner there lyed Jackle compltly bruised ,hurt ,cold and more important almost dead. Forbidden Lintery looked at the beast "What are you?" She asked. The beast responded with a roar. "Looks like im gonna have to fight this thing and worse_____save Jackle..."

FINAL BOSS PART 1 OF 3 JACKLE FORM!: Lintery sent a Near far blast at it but it dodged she then heard. "Lintery hold down your power level for a stronger Near far blast shot were all counting on you!" Lintery regognised that voice it was Danfed. "Im speaking to you telling you how to kill this beast it is what corupted Jackle it absorbs forbidden energy so avoid useing Near far blast until its stuned!" Lintery hit the beast locking in arm to arm combat and she hit it hard enough it became stunned. Lintery then charged up a Near far blast and sent it at the monster making it scream out in pain she repeated this prosses 2 more times.

FINAL BOSS PART 2 OF 3 EVOLOUTION!!!: The beast began growing it wasnt in Jackle form now more of a monster form it had wings and its hair parted on the right it was black and its horns were big. It sent a bomb like attack at Lintery. "Ok Lintery your moves of forbidden energy wont work at all here so rely on your ideya launcher." Lintery said. "Understood." Lintery shot the armor plates and broke them running at the beast she shot it in all of the armor places destroying all of the armor. "Lintery now dont hold back use a Near far blast now!" Lintery did as told and shot the monster with a Near far blast.

FINAL BOSS PART 3 OF 3 THE TRUE BEAST!!!! Lintery looked at the beast is head was like a bull's and his body was like a devils it was compltly purple eyes shining ruby red. "Ok Lintery its invisible this time so...-" The beast shot Danfed knocking him out. It looked at Lintery and fired a inecsapeable beam at her almost killing her. Lintery fell to her knee's compltly drained of her energy. The forbidden ideya glowed and disapeared. (yes cue paper mario crystal star music)

Spire looked at the forbidden light coming out of the one area. "Hey they are going in the directions of where they once were!"

One of the forbidden ideya landed infront of Wizeman with a bunch of defeated nightmaren soldiers. "People of nightmare im the spirit of grey forbidden ideya and Lintery now is fighting despritly for all of your life's..."

All of the area's forbidden ideya were they went to everywhere they told of what Lintery was doing. Everyone cheered.

Lintery got back up feeling stronger tougher and ready to kill the monster. She powered up a Near far blast and with everyone's combined strength kill the beast with one final blast. As it dropped dead Lintery looked at Jackle and gave him a forbidden ideya the orange one to be percise. "Jackle i hate you..." Lintery walked off back to home where Spire and everyone was waiting for her.

"Good job Lintery you did it you won!" Lintery sighed. "Yes but only me you and Tine may know of this oh and yeh Danfed..." Lintery grabbed a machine it sent a bright flash wipeing everyone's memorys except her Jackle, Spire, Danfed, and Tine. "Ok lets party!" Lintery said.

Credits: Ed ed n eddy refferences belong to their owners
Brother my brother song by the pokemon company
requim for a tower from the lord of rings
what else NiGHTS, Reala, and Jackle, Will, Hellen, Wizeman, Chameleon, Queen bella all belong to sega
and whatever else i missed ok thats it all the chapters are over so happy new year! (months from now i will release the sequal the death gods wrath)
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